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2类衔接方法:暗承接

(借助代词或者与分论点直接有关的名词)

“暗承接”就是不直接使用连接词,而是通过上下文之间的内在语义联系来建立起支持句的行文衔接

不用连接词的行文衔接方法之1 使用代词

用人称代词或者物主代词实现行文衔接的实例

例1

分论点:Young adults who take a year off may never return to their studies.

它的支持句:

They may think that it is better to continue in a job or to do something that is different from a university course.

用法说明:用人称代词they对分论点里的young adults进行指代,句首不用连接词也同样实现了分论点和支持句之间的自然衔接

例2

分论点:Studying abroad makes young people more independent.

它的支持句:

They live far away from their parents and need to cook, clean their room and manage money on their own.

用法说明:用人称代词they和物主代词their建立起分论点和支持句之间的流畅衔接

用 指示代词 实现行文衔接的实例:

例1

分论点:Physical activity can be encouraged by providing exercise equipment in parks.

它的支持句:

This has the benefit that parents and children can often use them together for fun.

用法说明:当this在支持句的开头独立使用(也就是this后面不跟名词)时,它是指代分论点整体所讲的内容

例2

分论点:Each family produces a large amount of waste every week.

它的支持句:

Most of this rubbish comes from the packaging of the things that the family members buy.

用法说明:当支持句里的this后面紧跟一个普通单数名词时,它是指代分论点里提到的某个事物

例3

分论点:Articles in newspapers are written by professional journalists.

它的支持句:

These articles have more details and are more reliable than many news articles that can be found online.

用法说明:支持句和分论点之间也没有使用任何连接词,而是用These articles指代分论点里的Articles in newspapers这个复数概念,从而在两句话之间建立起了通顺的衔接

不用连接词的行文衔接方法之2 与分论点直接有关的名词

和分论点直接有关的名词实例:

分论点:The cost of living in urban areas is higher than in rural areas.

它的支持句:

Urban residents have to pay higher prices for food, transport and health care.

用法说明: urban residents(城市居民,地道英文里也可以叫city dwellers)和分论点的内容直接有关,在分论点和支持句之间建立起了自然的衔接